Profile evaluation

Hi Everyone,
I was wondering if you could take a look at my profile and give me your feedback. Here is my profile:

- 26-year-old male from South America

- Undergraduate degree in Mechanical Engineering from The University of Florida (3.5/4.0)

- Graduate degree in Mechanical Engineering from The University of Florida (3.6/4.0)

- 640 GMAT (35 Verbal & 43 Quant)

- 4 years of experience at a large aerospace company while getting my MS

- President of a Hispanic society for a year (~100 members)

- Associate in a leadership development program in my company (leadership training and community service
are the main focus areas)

Schools I’d like to get in:
HBS, MIT, Booth, Kellogg, NYU, or Duke

I’d really appreciate you taking the time to give me your feedback.

Thanks,

J