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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
It is a well known fact that things become less effective with their more and more usage. on the other hand there is but one thing, A magnificent super machine which a human possesses, that develops when one uses it more and more and that is human brain. The more one uses the brain the more effective it becomes and stronger even more and vice versa. Ever since the technology came it made humans crippled since they rely on technology too much that their minds have stopped working creatively.
In order to address this issue there are several things a person can speak of, as shown in the above paragraph. Firstly it is quite conspicuous that web search engines that are now source of information are really detrimental for students in sense that by using them students are loosing ability to think on their own. for instance if a student has been given a task, the solution to which is just a click away. Students thus do not bother to use their own mind to think and they find the solution on internet and plagiarize that. Hence gradually they loose their own ability to think. it is quite natural that with practice mind grows more. So a student should develop habit of thinking , in order to become more and more creative, otherwise his mind will not be developed to think.
Secondly, calculators surely a small handy device which always comes handy when one wants to do some calculations very quickly, however, there are many problems that arise now among the students. For example students use their calculators for very simple and basic calculations for which calculators are not necessary. Back in the days students remembered their simple mathematics tables. and now students use calculators for simple additions and multiplications also .It is always easy to tackle a problem when someone knows the basics while not having a calculator . On the other hand however, it becomes difficult when someone neither knows the basics nor have a calculator. This is where problem occurs since they totally rely on calculators for their very basic calculations.
To conclude it can be said that as much as the technology is beneficial for humans it is equally dangerous too. whether it is in form of internet ,calculator or in any other technology, it is deteriorating the human mind because humans are misusing the technology when their own minds can serve the very purpose much effectively. People just need to use technology in proper way and start using their minds. This is the only way to see what complex machines, brains, we hold and that their proper use can make us go along with them quite effective.![]()
tell me my good and bad points and give me marks also:)
your comment are much appreciated.thanks in advance
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
It is a well known fact that things become less effective with their more and more usage. on the other hand there is but one thing, A magnificent super machine which a human possesses, that develops when one uses it more and more and that is human brain. The more one uses the brain the more effective it becomes and stronger even more and vice versa. Ever since the technology came it made humans crippled since they rely on technology too much that their minds have stopped working creatively.
In order to address this issue there are several things a person can speak of, as shown in the above paragraph. Firstly it is quite conspicuous that web search engines that are now source of information are really detrimental for students in sense that by using them students are loosing ability to think on their own. for instance if a student has been given a task, the solution to which is just a click away. Students thus do not bother to use their own mind to think and they find the solution on internet and plagiarize that. Hence gradually they loose their own ability to think. it is quite natural that with practice mind grows more. So a student should develop habit of thinking , in order to become more and more creative, otherwise his mind will not be developed to think.
Secondly, calculators surely a small handy device which always comes handy when one wants to do some calculations very quickly, however, there are many problems that arise now among the students. For example students use their calculators for very simple and basic calculations for which calculators are not necessary. Back in the days students remembered their simple mathematics tables. and now students use calculators for simple additions and multiplications also .It is always easy to tackle a problem when someone knows the basics while not having a calculator . On the other hand however, it becomes difficult when someone neither knows the basics nor have a calculator. This is where problem occurs since they totally rely on calculators for their very basic calculations.
To conclude it can be said that as much as the technology is beneficial for humans it is equally dangerous too. whether it is in form of internet ,calculator or in any other technology, it is deteriorating the human mind because humans are misusing the technology when their own minds can serve the very purpose much effectively. People just need to use technology in proper way and start using their minds. This is the only way to see what complex machines, brains, we hold and that their proper use can make us go along with them quite effective.